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- Generally a relatively tepid tone towards the Department’s performance fostering an equitable workspace
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- Generally a relatively tepid tone towards the Department’s performance in fostering an equitable workspace
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- Many respondents noted that while the Department is diverse in its makeup, it is falling short on issues of  equity
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- Many respondents noted that while the Department is diverse in its makeup, it is falling short on issues of equity
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- A number of respondents made a distinction between advancement opportunities for Indigenous employees versus those offered to visible minority employees, and cited a need for greater Indigenous representation at senior levels of management.
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- A number of respondents made a distinction between advancement opportunities for Indigenous employees versus those offered to visible minorities, and cited a need for greater Indigenous representation at senior levels of management.
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- Fairly balanced response and reflect the results from question 2   
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- Fairly balanced response that reflects the results from question 2   
    
- Respondents did not necessarily perceive hiring as the problem, more so retention.
 
- Respondents did not necessarily perceive hiring as the problem, more so retention.
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- This question yielded mixed results as many answers unsure how to answer  
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- This question yielded mixed results as many respondents were unsure how to answer  
    
- Responses identified the need for the greater clarity and communication on the mandate and mission statement of the Visible Minority Working Group
 
- Responses identified the need for the greater clarity and communication on the mandate and mission statement of the Visible Minority Working Group
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- The subgroup also considered that there may have been an issue in the way the question was structured and that lead to confusion
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- The subgroup also considered that the way the question was worded may have lead to confusion
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- Responses that fell with the Working Group's scope of work focused on hiring and retention and training for supervisors and senior managers.
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- Responses that fell within the Working Group's scope of work focused on hiring, retention of visible minorities and training for supervisors and senior managers.
     
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